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Форум: Общие вопросы: Обращение к переводчикам!

81. Meneldor » 04.10.2005 13:16 

DrownedMaid, у нас накопилось ну очень много переводов  :) :). Постепенно мы их все выкладываем – донт уорри  :) :)!

82. pizda s ushami » 06.10.2005 08:07 

"ну очень много" – это хорошо!

83. GothicDarkKnight » 06.10.2005 22:42 

Ganconer?! и Lightbringer?!
ААААААААААААААААААААА

N.P.: Malerija\2000

84. Ganconer » 07.10.2005 18:50 

Ну типа мы работаем над этим, да?!

N.P.: Невидь – Зов новой Гипербореи

85. Ghostman » 09.10.2005 01:46 

« Solus Ars Ignis:

И ещё отдельный вопрос к организаторам сайта, когда появятся тексты Whiplash

Эх, мне бы оригиналы найти... Про переводы я молчу. Пришли мне их лтрику, а уж я попрошу перевести.

86. Crazy » 09.10.2005 06:57 

Кто-нибудь мне может объяснить почему страница с переводом At the heart of winter Immortal вылетает с ошибкой 404???

N.P.: Via Msitica – Deadly lullaby

87. Lightbringer » 09.10.2005 23:45 

*******, *****, сколько к переводчикам не обращайся, а только топ они этот не читают – сегодняшняя сводка новостей есть отличное тому подтверждение. Хотя у меня тоже половина переводов – гавно. Хотя я, м.б., себе даже и льщу..

N.P.: Red Sparrows

88. Meneldor » 10.10.2005 12:00 

Crazy, есть такая лажа, будет исправлена чуть позже, когда придумаю, как  :) :).

Lightbringer, не будь слишком критичным, а то разлюбишь жизнь  :) :).

89. AnvadicA » 11.10.2005 19:18 

Meneldor, в твоей рецензии на THE PROVENANCE лирические вставки есть перевод текста из буклета?? Если да, то именно такими я бы хотел видеть ВСЕ переводы на МЛ!!!

N.P.: Darkseed – Spellcraft

90. Meneldor » 11.10.2005 19:55 

AnvadicA, и в рецензии на Ulver это тоже переводы текстов  :) :). Однако вот загвоздка: The Provenance пишет часть лирики с рифмой и ритмом, которые я постарался сохранить вместе с передачей смысла, а вот Ulver, например, не пишет даже не белым стихом – что делать в его случае? Само собой, стихотворную лирику нужно стараться переводить творчески. Но её слишком немного  :| :|.

91. Solus Ars Ignis » 11.10.2005 20:03 

« Ghostman:

" Ghostman:
Эх, мне бы оригиналы найти... Про переводы я молчу. Пришли мне их лтрику, а уж я попрошу перевести.

Дак я тоже английские тексты ищу.

To all:
А про Death так ни кто и не вспомнил. :( :(

N.P.: Pungent Stench

92. Crazy » 11.10.2005 20:10 

WHIPLASH LYRICS
Power And Pain (1985)
1. Stagedive

Get on the go over and done plotting the plan of attack
It\'s time to fly over the stage high above each Marshall stack
Passing the guard making the move scale the P.A. to the top
End the first verse past the bass bins not fearing the 30 foot drop

Thrash to kill blood will spill
Now that you\'ve met your match and nothing will suffice
Airborn offering thrashing sacrifice
Stealing the show eyes of the crowd focus of activity
Forty feet high moment of fame going down in history
Begin the flight splitting the smoke a swan dive into the sky
Tumbling down head over heels listening to cracking bones cry

2. Red Bomb

Night falls and she\'s out there walking the street
Hiding sking to dog the blue coats on the beat
The heat is on her tail tonight like never before
Down on twenty seventh street where she breaks the law
She bares her body to entice
Another john to pay the price
She earns her living on her back
Her legs spread wide apart forevermore
Moonlight\'s staring down at red bomb from above
Tonight there will be no sex there\'ll be no lust
Never doubt at any time she\'s worth the fee
If you lay your money down then you\'ll agree

Once she\'s in your sight long legs and red hair strike your appetite
Time that you lock eyes with the red bomb try her on for size
You\'ll do what you want, take what you will cause she\'s no cheap thrill
Hand over your cash for the right price she\'ll give you the gash

3. Last Man Alive

Take a look to the sky for your pot of gold
You can hear every cloud story to be told
Listen close what is this
Not bird or plane
Could it be the H bomb fucking with your brain

Even if you\'d seen it you never would believe it
Even in your sleep you would never dream it
The bomb is falling fast nothing\'s going to stop it
How will you know that you\'re the last man alive
All it takes just one touch over one, two, three
With a flick of a switch turn on World War 3
With a flash there will be no one left alive
Search the earth just to find worldwide homicide
Metal mass cuts the wind whistling through its course
Suddenly crashing down hits the ground full force
Aims to kill one and all bursting into flames
Only you\'re left alive no one left to blame

4. Message In Blood

Black act of injustice brought by the wizard of evil
Cast death and corruption who left the message in blood?

Death reign cleanse the earth it\'s the ageless night
The world\'s end is near wrong outnumbers right
What\'s left helter skelter look read between the lines
Can you find a meaning to these sinister crimes?

5. Warmonger

Lurking in the astral skies lust, power, greed, hate
Leader of the fighting force face of black fate
2100 A.D. at this man\'s will
Powerthrashing death brigade regroups to kill
Can\'t just ignore what\'s right bow to the powerlord
Warmonger
Bombs are falling from above death metal storm
Dogfight of the modern day starwars take form
Starships shooting in and out amazing grace
To each man a battlestar chasing through space
Obeying every order heard brainwashed by their leader\'s word
Kamikaze warriors aim for the sun
Taking off for outer space four, three, two, one
Retrorockets activate lifting the craft
Final sound the fighters hear warmonger laugh
All the troops have died at war bow to the powerlord
Warmonger

6. Power Thrashing Death

Inject it into the blood directly into the vein
Metal assault on the ear feeling it flow to the brain
It can get under the skin the power metal syringe
It puts an end to all pain another headbanger singed

Breathe the metal in the air feel power everywhere
Taste, here\'s a double dose to take a fix of power thrashing death
Scream at the top of your lungs it\'s time to let yourself go
There is no lesson to learn get up, get into the show
The power to satisfy those who react to high speed
There is no secret to hide metal is all that you need

7. Stirring The Cauldron

The moon is full one dark evil night
A blood curdling chill perilous fight
The fog is thick the clouds set in
A twist of fate a night of sin
The howl of the wolf a dark evil power
Creeps down your spine it\'s the witching hour

The minute you fall to the hands of the flame
Evil will take its course, it\'s all over
The wicked witch\'s mission is through
Once the bubbling brew has tasted you
The eye of newt and fang of bat
A pinch of this a pinch of that
An odor lurks from burning skin
The spice of life the cauldron will win
The chanting is done devour your stew
Just don\'t turn your eyes or it\'ll devour you

8. Spit On Your Grave

Ruthless and evil lies that deceive
Meaningless virtues knee deep in greed

I am the master with the iron fist
I am the master no one knows exists
I am the master I\'ll take your life
I am the master I\'ll spit on your grave
Taking advantage guilty as sin
And into the cauldron where no one can win

Thrown down and stepped on and knifed in the back
Civilization is under attack

9. Nailed To The Cross

With an evil life comes an evil fate
Only a question of time to open the gate
It\'s a fact that you\'re going to die
By tomorrow you\'ll be crucified

Nailed on, nailed to the cross
Nailed on, nailed to the cross
You stand erect no life left
Your soul\'s been robbed lucifer\'s theft
Consciousness loneliness at the top
Must confess but it\'s too late for them to stop

A frowning face falls from out of the sky
Spitting blood head of a demon from hell
And you\'re left without a soul to sell
Double cross, eternity in hell
Nailed on, nailed to the cross
Nailed on, nailed to the
You know that you\'re dead when you\'re nailed to the cross...

WHIPLASH LYRICS
Ticket To Mayhem (1987)

1. Perpetual Warfare

[Intro]

2. Walk The Plank

[Lyrics: Tony Portaro/Joe Cangelosi, Music: Tony Portaro]

Ship has set sail, sea will prevail
Swallow the slaughter, drink the salt water
Pawn of the power, sea will devour
Infinite day, awaiting the hour

[Chorus :] :]
Walk the plank
Walk the plank

Trid ball and chain, infliction of pain
Vulture\'s arise, death in their eyes
Under the gun, food supply none
Knife in the back, nowhere to run

[Repeat chorus]

[Post-chorus :] :]
All hope is lost been double crossed
Legion of death steal your last breath

The trechery of muting, lightning and thunder
Make the mind wander
Water\'s infected, captain\'s arrested
Sharks in the water, body\'s injected

[Repeat chorus]
[Repeat post-chorus]

3. Last Nail In The Coffin

[Lyrics: Tony Portaro, Music: Tony Portaro/Tony Bono]

Without one breath of life from the coffin\'
The body begins to arise
It\'s rotted skin smelling of death
A hand of bones creeps from inside
Emerging with two glowing eyes

These eyes are forever hypnotizing
Burning your very soul
Passionate, painless, paralyzing
They\'re gonna turn your blood cold

These eyes will forever hypnotize you
They\'ll turn around and they\'ll blind you

Evil inside those eyes

4. Drowning In Torment

[Lyrics: Tony Portaro/Joe Cangelosi, Music: Tony Portaro]

What is seen
Through the eyes of the crippled mind
No wasted time
No wasted line
Unforseen death What a seen

When the terror of the mind
Is craving evil lines
Confusion time
One step closer to...
Lust decides your fate

So the seeds will grow
Snow will dominate
Life is left to blow

Living dream, illusion being
Strength evolves from stimulation
The minds railng
Another gram is blown, eyes gleam
Numbness felt through the veins
Surging
The nose burning
Never learning
One step closer to...
Hell inside the soul
Melts into the brain
Life is uncontrolled

Victim of cocaine

Dream your life, life\'s a dream
Another line, a deadly scheme
You will pay
Through the nose
An evil plot to get the blow

You will see, you are left
With nothing more, you bargained for
The money\'s gone, left in despair
You coming down, what you can\'t bear

Hell inside the soul melts into the brain
Life is uncontrolled, victim of cocaine

Conscious will never recover
Temptations taking control
Body\'s rejecting the substance
School of the wasted enrolled

Evil prevails to take over
Something like driving while blind
Reality must take cover
Left with a scar on the mind

5. The Burning Of Atlanta

The craving to ignite, reflects a glowing light
The fire in his eyes is ibearing no disguise
Armed with an evil grin, that sparks the flame within
The pyromaniac will burn this town, ignoring all costs

[Chorus :] :]
Atlanta is burning down
Atlanta is burning down
Atlanta is burning down
Atlanta is burning down

Thousands will die
And there\'s no telling why

In his psychotic mind, his twisted thoughts unmind
No motive to this deed, he\'s of an evil breed
A killer to his grave, now who could ever save
The striker meets the match, the flames begin to catch
And he\'s gone

[Repeat chorus]

The culprit of the crime will not escape this time
Cause what he left behind, would be the proof they\'d find
A tank of gasoline was proof...the guillotine

[Repeat chorus]

6. Eternal Eyes (Last Nail In The Coffin, Part II)

[Lyrics: Tony Portaro, Music: Tony Portaro/Tony Bono]

A bomb explodes in your head, it\'s one of those days
You should have stayed in bed, something\'s gone wrong
Nothing\'s gone right, eternal eyes will take you alive

It\'s a fact of life, it\'s a fact of death – eternal eyes
Are you dead or alive, can\'t get them out of your face
Can\'t get them out of your mind, you\'ll never escape
With two feet in your grave

7. Snake Pit

Judgement day\'s here, smell of death\'s near
Captor\'s ignoring the cries
Tragedy\'s stand, trouble at hand
Death jury plots the demise
Hungry to kill
Torture at will

Anxiously waiting the word
Sentence to cast
Won\'t be the last
Laugh when the verdict is heard

Last straw
Through with the final injunction
Case closed
No one will ever get free

[Chorus :] :]
Snake pit
Snake pit
Snake pit

Guilty of sin, no one will win
Death jurers plot till the death
Justice at large, make up a change
Waiting to stear your last breath

Gaffle will fall, order from all
Silence overcomes the court
Don\'t say a word
Sentence is heard
Might make the vision distort

[Repeat chorus]
[Lead]
[Chorus]
[1st verse]
[Chorus]

8. Spiral Of Violence

One man with our lives in his hands
So much power
And so much pressure – is waiting on his command
Brainstorm

From out of the norm, a winning battle plan
And it\'s out of our hands
So the regiments form

[Chorus :] :]
The angel of war
Unleashing terror

Who\'ll throw the first crushing blow
Who will decide who has the last laugh
Who will throw the last blow

One of a kind
Who\'s out of his mind
He who thinks he holds all the answers
Can destroy all mankind

[Repeat chorus]

Wareny
Heard cut through the sky
Flip of a coin turns heads you will live
Lands on tails you will die
Napalm
A nuclear bomb
A flamethrower and a hand grenade
And I\'m back in Viet Nam

[Repeat chorus]

9. Respect The Dead

Ones your souls at rest
That\'s when you\'ll cofess
Cut you down to size
Make you realize

That you not so tough
Say you\'ve had enough
What it takes to learn
On the cross you\'ll burn

You must respect the dead
That\'s where your future lies
You must respect the dead
Or they\'ll rip out your eyes

When you in your tomb
You will meet with doom
Cause you\'ve cursed the dead
Better left unsaid

You\'ll regret the days
That you\'ve spit on graves
Now your time has come
You immortal scum

[Repeat chorus]
[Lead]
[1st verse]
[chorus]

10. Perpetual Warfare

[Outro]

N.P.: Clawfinger – Nigger

93. Ghostman » 11.10.2005 22:01 

Вот эта лирика как раз есть. Не хватает "Insult To Injury", "Cult Of One", "Thrashback", "Messages In Blood"...

94. Crazy » 12.10.2005 04:06 

Ну уж извиняйте!!! А вообще – лучший архив металл-лирики

N.P.: Immortal – Within The Dark Mind

95. Solus Ars Ignis » 12.10.2005 18:57 

To Crazy.
Спасибо хотя бы и на этом.

А про Death так и не кто и не вспомнил  :( :(

N.P.: Pungent Stench

96. pizda s ushami » 19.10.2005 12:34 

Хотелось бы надыбать где-нить лирики Aaskereia, Riger и Nagelfar "Srontgorrth" (последняя на Метлибе есть, но она немного инвалидна).

97. pizda s ushami » 20.10.2005 13:15 

Ну раз никто не хочет поделиться, делюсь тем, что есть у меня, а именно 4-я глава Srontgorrth, которой в Инциклопии нет почему-то:

Das vierte Kapitel: Der Winter (Trьmmer)
Strцmungen fordern alles Leben in sich so bannen mich einst Existenzen.
Ermьdet knieend langsam zцgernd verschlingen, irren um Wege zu Trдumen.

-ENDZEIT-

Wege zu Trдumen?

Ich richte mich auf ьber Hьllen.
Verschlingt die Sonne auf (der) Jagd.
Der Ewigkeit Herkunft entsprungenen – LEIDS – ist,
wenn der Frьhling der Frьhling (er) stirbt.

Ich richte mich auf ьber Hьllen.
Verschlingt die Sonne auf (der) Jagd.
Der Ewigkeit entsprungenem – LEIDS – ist,
wenn der Frьhling (er) stirbt.

Trauer und Hass hieЯen meine Krдfte vergessen
aber verbanden mich mit der Existenz jenseits der Tore.

Lichter (durch springen) durchdringen. (....)
BewuЯt цffne ich Zeiten!

ЗЫ на месте русских букв по идее должны находиться немецкие закорючки, но мне лень все это исправлять, тем более что умляуты на клавиатуре отсутсвуют.

98. spown » 21.10.2005 08:37 

хотелось бы выразить огромную благодарность тем кто занимается переводами ибо их труд достоен всяческого уважения. сам я в иностранных языках не силен, а по этому труд переводчиков дает возможность полнее ощутить переживания заложенные в песни!!! спасибо, люди!!!!

99. Meneldor » 21.10.2005 09:47 

spown, спасибо тебе, что высказал мнение! Ибо иногда переводчики считают, что их дело ни к чему, и ведь ошибаются, но люди предпочитают не выражать своих эмоций в форуме  :( :(.  :D :D

100. AnvadicA » 25.10.2005 19:44 

« Meneldor:

а вот Ulver, например, не пишет даже не белым стихом – что делать в его случае?

Вопрос решается просто: нужно чтобы русские слова нормально ложились в музыку (чтоб можно было их петь... если таковое применимо по отношению к ульвер) :) :)

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